Poem Drawing Interpitation

Hey Folks so this week is a bit different, I'll just have a drawing interpretation of a poem. The part of the poem that stood out to me the most was the description of the eyes an the sounds that the boy was hearing. As well as the overall tone of the piece. Please tell me what you guys think of the interpretation.

A Hard Rain's A-­‐Gonna Fall 
by Bob Dylan

And what did you hear, my blue-­‐eyed  son?
And what did you hear, my darling young one?
I heard the sound of  a  thunder  that roared out a warnin'
I heard the roar of a wave that could drown the whole world
I heard one hundred drummers whose hands were a-­‐blazin'
I heard ten thousand whisperin' and nobody listenin'"